All Comments on 'The Escort'

Lovely woman and lovely story, Dawn!

So beautiful

That was exhausting. Gael was annoying me. I know she didn't want to get her feelings hurt by assuming things but the light bulb should've clicked on the night she threw Matt out. Why would he go through all that trouble confronting her if she was just some whore he used for his own needs? He could've have sex with plenty of women without paying for it I'm sure.

If anyone's age was mentioned, it didn't register with me...

The second paragraph describes Gael as "middle-aged..."

No age mentioned, perhaps, but that'll do nicely! (Won't it?)

Marry her, and put babies in her. Tell everyone, "this is my wife Gael, mother of our babies"!