All Comments on 'The Evil Within Ch. 03'

I just read the last chapter of ?The Evil Within? and your story is an excellent piece of literature!

I like your attention to detail. Your characters are vivid, lifelike, terrifying, evil, and some so fragile.

I remember every detail of your story, every detail?it was real, it was alive, it was terrifying beyond belief and for this genre that?s a compliment! I don?t normally read the erotic horror stories but the ?E? caught my eye and I?m glad I did. It certainly deserves the ?E? and a vote of 5.

Wow, that was one intense story. I loved it and couldn't stop reading it. Sad thing is this prolly happens. Loved it though

...peek into your mind. Intense story. It needs some polish, but the premise of the story forced me to keep reading. I HAD to finish it. Well done! ~Minx