All Comments on 'The Evolution of a Sissy'

Enjoying an almost autobiographical story - though I expect that her adventures will move faster than mine! Looking forward to the rest of the story.

You switch from 3rd person the entire story to first person in the 5th sentence in the 3rd paragraph from the end.

This went from third person to second person to first person.

Looking forward to more, but make the voice consistent.

Thank you for the comments so far. I did notice that I kept jumping from 1st to 3rd person too much. Noted, I will make it 1st person in the future chapters.

Looking forward to more. Thank you.

An old man who calls himself straight even though he fantasizes about black cocks, just be gay and be done with it. It's not like we can respect you any less.

My cock is average, I don't care what color a guy is, I have no sexual interest in women and I have no negative feelings about what I like. However, I'm gay, a Bottom, a cross dresser, and a sissy who is addicted to latex and I completely understand how wonderful it makes you feel!

Yeah consistent perspective. I liked it from the 3rd person better than later. Once you start to describe parts of the experience you are inherently commited to explaining others that proceed it. Don't rush once you've established the style.