All Comments on 'The Examination'

by Julie20

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very Poor

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BarbaraBarbaraover 13 years ago
Help if needed?

Read the story: Abduction aftermath; Arnolds Idea part 1, written ten years ago, for experienced help? Corresponding, if you are into 'BDSM' type feminine contributers, by way of conveying factual historic events into written erotic sensuality, including some 'highly painful' forced anal penetration. IE: Having experienced the thrills of posing 'stark naked' myself, I have much to offer younger lady writers ! Overseas currently, continued anonymity was not my reason to comment, as a former reader!

BarbaraBarbaraover 13 years ago
Good storyline work thus far, worth a 5 Vote!

Still needing linguistic improvement in grammer usage, 'erotic' writer did develop reader interest by capturing helplessness in 'naked' submissions! Mental health issues aside, look forward to descriptive humiliation as Julie recognises her need to reveal her sexual feelings openly, shocking fellow students with fully orgasmic responses under further medical stimulation. Keep writing by all means, exploring all aspects of nympomania, including perhaps anal or 'DP' masturbation that gains erotic readership?

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 13 years ago
Intriguing story.

I need to go back and read some of your earlier work. Nice job.

QxiaxeQxiaxeover 13 years ago

Awesome julie...loved the touch of fear at the end!

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