by K.A. Ryde
A good start and we will see how this plays out. The storyline has promise and you have started to develop the characters and their roles so lets see how you take these girls towards a fun time and adventure. Cheers
Really enjoyed this story... a great start for the series, I look forward to reading more about Emma.
Really good Part 1 - I liked the 'plot' and you tell the story with just the right level of eroticism - looking forward to the follow-ups!