All Comments on 'The Experiment'

This story REALLY did it for me!

So damn intense and the way you were talking to his cock,my god that was so friggin arousing my cock was engorged & leaking for someone to talk to him like that lol EXCELLENT work! you are one hell of a writer lady.

Use of things like suddenly saw a post...really! Why yse suddenly.

Then writing like we were thinking is wet.

The first half of the story was excellent. It was different and it made me smile. It made me think that the story should be in Romance.

But then it changed into porn and the whole mood changed. Too explicit. Nothing was left to the imagination of the reader. After all those years they were falling in love all over again but the warm, tender image you’d built turned into one of those run-of-the-mill two strangers meeting up and then spending the night fucking each other type of story.

I’m still going to give you 5 stars for the first half because I enjoyed it so much.

Another great read. I loved both aspects of the story.

Good yarn , would have scored higher in Mature.