by olympusmons
You said Slade and Vee are going to have further adventures. Please continue their story. Or have you posted it somewhere else?
Very good work. A bit descriptive in the beginning, but the rest was great. I like robots that don't look exactly like humans, but you can see that they're robots. This had that and it was also very hot. Keep up the good work!
I dont usually read much in the sci fi category but this was well written and opened up a lot of avenues for exploration (and not just of the solar system).
Although short this has got to be one of the best stories that I have ever read in the Sci-Fi fantasy catagory, I do hope that ther will be more chapters added in the future.