All Comments on 'The Extra'

What a wonderful story and well written. Enjoyed reading it.

Second try. Best I have read here. A little too long, but Great. Please, more?

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Great story. 5star. I read from start to finish, when thats 12 pages, it indicates the story kept me wanting to see what happened.

I felt what sex that was mentioned in the story almost felt like it was added afterward in order to classify this work as an erotic story. No real build up and intimacy as Walker and Abi make love the first time and the reader is introduced to this after they had finished their first coupling. Their next coupling could have been much more, however they seemed to have a little conversation about how neither had been with many others recently, seems a bit late when they were already committed and well and truly fucking... then it was over in barely a few short paragraphs.

Elsewhere in the story I laughed when it said Walker liked his reliable Landrover. I know that Landrover has been making mechanics out of motorists for nearly seventy years.

This story was a joy to read and gets a well deserved five stars from me.

I enjoyed the story but I’m sorry it was a 4 page tale spread over 12 pages .

Only got about half way on page 1.

A lot of information dumped in a confusing way. Bit like the start of english cop shows.

Bit of a mix at the start and the end was a tad compressed, still I really enjoyed the flow of the tale and the characters.

Nicely done.

It was too long for my 1st read. It was just right this time. Easy 5*

awesome story. thank you for an entertaining read on a cold winter night. lovely lovely story

Great start, but I felt the story went off the rails after the introduction of Walker’s daughter. It became less about the romance of Walker & Abi and more of a trashy soap opera.

It doesn’t make sense that a guy who hated his own name would name his son Gerald Walter.

Have to agree with the last comment. Started well but was too long. Once Walker and Abi were together everything else was just added drama and wasn't necessary. Love the two of them but Sierra, Chris, and Bull weren't really needed.