All Comments on 'The F Company Ch. 04: Goan Affairs'

I'm really enjoying the story but here are a few tips I'd recommend:

1. Tone down the incest, not just because it's taboo but there isn't really a power dynamic involved. The sex is coming to Faizal too easily.

2. Most of the sex has been consensual hookups with the women giving themselves up too easily. Having faizal force himself and the woman slowly giving herself up would be better.

3. Have more imagery and description around what faizal is actually doing in the scene

This is an all time great story on this site!

Feroz- the pussy magnet !

Sarah should come back to seduce Feroz and fuck the daylights out of him

I would like it more if Feroz gets to tame a nemesis; a deadly woman who wants to finish him off. Feroz should be fucking assassins, spies, nasty women! We would love them even more if they are adversaries to Feroz. Feroz getting seduced by antagonists & putting his reputation or even life at stake would give the readers a great high. For now, Sarah can seduce Feroz to find out how's he gonna run F company without his dad & inform her husband that his younger son is not so naive as he thinks he is.

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