All Comments on 'The Faces of Freida Fay McBeal'

This was…beautiful. Absolutely beautiful and filled with so much raw emotion…I haven’t read a story of yours that I didn’t like, but I have to say that to me they all pale compared to this. Truly fantastic!

Very sweet story and very well told.

I very rarely give 5 stars, very good stories get 4 stars and 5 stars have to be exceptional. You got 5 stars.

I had watery eyes near the end. Nice. Caring gentle. Thanks

Very well done. I could have easily read 300 more pages of this story. Cheers. Frankie

Excellent.

Thank you.

You created two people who didn't know they would complete each other until they did. We should all be so blessed.

I enjoyed this romance a lot. An engineer and an artist? Great idea. Thanks

Very sweet and convincing story, I loved it.

Excellent! My day always seems brighter when I see you have posted another story.

A great job showing how two such different characters can make real contact, though neither has any understanding, initially, of even why they are drawn to or need the other. Bravo. And thank you. A truly unusual take on life and those who just don’t “fit in.”

All I can say Ronde is just WOW! Your stories just keep blowing me away. You have some very serious talent. Another exceptional romance story. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. 5* and thats only due to the limits set by this site.

This was a heart warming story that showed insight about love and how true love can be found no matter how difficult life has been. I too, have enjoyed and read all your stories. Thank you for this gift! K

Amazing.

Thank you.

Lucky he didn't get her pregnant on their first time together. 4*

Exceptional. I have read all your work on here and this is in the top three in my humble opinion.

One of the best i read here. Excellent.

OK...I hate that I am limited to 5 stars! Great story....Just what I needed this morning. Thank you!

Hoping there will be sequels. Well done.

Burned right into my soul. Just a delightful, enjoyable story.

Well done - interesting characters in an intriguing situation with a satisfying resolution. I would like to see more of/about these two, but this segment feels finished. Perhaps the foreshadowed baby would add an interesting twist to the saga? Definitely a five-star production - More, please?

Very delightful story!

5

You did it again, new slant on a well word theme expressed with a new face (or 11). Enjoyed it

You really have a great imagination and a gift with words.

5*

The storyline is presented in much the same way as Frieda Fay’s mind works. Not sure if that was the intent, but it came through to me and I find it an amazing piece of literature. 5.0*

I have to tell you, I so much appreciate your writing! Touches me in a very rare way. Thanks.

Great story, fells very true to life

Loved this!

I rarely rate stories but this one was exceptional. Extremely well done.

You really pull the emotions out of readers with this story, really well done. I would leave this as written, I don't think a sequel could make it any better than it already is. Thanks for this.

Thank you. That was outstanding. Do not change a word. No follow up necessary. 5 Stars.

Fantastic

Powerful stuff, thank you.

Absolutely lovely. Thanks!

Oh. Wow.

Jack is a lucky man who has a variety of partners in life that love him and are all the same person.

No he is very, very lucky.

Beautifully done. Thank you

Ronde,

Overall, this was very good. In developing the character Freida - it was a solid home run. 'Really well done.

-DreadedAnonymous

You've managed to get to a place that most authors cannot reach. You're in a mind that isn't run of the mill and has taken some effort to reach, but it is intriguing and leaves your audience something serious to think about. I'm not sure where we are, but it's worth thinking about and letting that place grow and develop. Thanks for the challenge. 5*

Really extraordinary, short, but not too short, exactly to the point, and thereby taken a topic that is difficult anyway, but formulated so well that it never seems forced, and nevertheless leaves room for own thoughts that deal with this topic and what it does to people.

Remarkable !

5/5 stars !

Pretty good, on the whole. Two comments: First, I'm not aware of any churches at all, today or any time recently, that hold that women are evil in the way described in this story. Second, I've known a number of artists, and they're all pretty articulate about their feelings as well as anything else. Admittedly, sometimes they find there's more in their artworks than they had been aware of in creating them--but that's not much like your description of Frieda Fay or like what the two art teachers supposedly say. Artists are often a little out of the norm, but I don't think that's the usual way.

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Still, Frieda Fay's (NOT "Frieda FAT's") rather bizarre personality is well enough explained by her family life and her peers' treatment of her. Well done.

As always, I just found that story from the top stories of the month. So I read it. And at the end of it, I saw the author. Ronde. Didn't really expect that kind of story from you, I don't know why, but I just can't. So sensitive, so open, so deep. I just feel warm. I want to feel it always, thx for that story.

One of your best. Jack must like always guessing what Freida Fay wants next, or is already planning. It was amazing that somehow he was intrigued by her in high school even though they never interacted. The Lord works in mysterious ways to bring people together.

With images more than just words rhode has presented the beauty of a true giving, self-sacrificing love that makes for a happily for ever after result. A sweet Romance beautifully done.

Thanks mate,

The Hoary Cleric

Incredibly well-written with an innovative plot, well-defined characters, and a depth of warm feeling that make this story extraordinary. The dialogue was perfect as it fit the characters and shows Frieda's arch of change from high school to a fully functional adult. The detail used to explain the pictures shows Frieda's personality and while not straightforward it enables Jact to come to know her for who she was and who she is. A gentle loving story that surpasses most that appear on this site.

An amazing story, deserving of a much wider readership than the Literotica members. Thank you very much, this one is even better the your normal exemplary output. 5 stars is definitely insufficient.

Almost perfection. As a man married to an artist, I felt you in my mind's eye. Wonderful, believable characters, A love story for the ages. Long on empathy, short on cant. On a scale of one-to-ten,

I'll give you fifteen, but then, I 'm a hard marker...smile