by Abigail_Cake
i've been following the story and loved the twists and turns and have been eagerly waiting for this part and in my personal opinion... it started off strong but it started to go down hill. now i understand you spent a lot of time doing this and that time is very much appreciated
I was worried there wouldn't be a conclusion. Great story, loved the gratuitous femininity :p
Boring! Nothing new and no real story. No counterpoint, just the human traffickers winning all the time.
This is a very long story of hopelessness. The machines don't break, the MC doesn't find a way to hold onto his mind, no one is searching for them, no one escapes, It's just non-stop bombardment of traffickers winning. There's not one paragraph of hope in this mess. It's just kidnapping, brainwashing, ruining people against their will and selling them as slaves. What an awful story!
This is a sick and sad fucking story. It's in the wrong category, it should be in non consent. Mutilation is not my thing and certainly has nothing g to do with being trans. The writer never gave these robots a chance.
Wrong category. Should be sci Fi or non consent. It's a horrible story about abduction, reprogramming and human trafficking. A one sided story where the bad guys win.
After reading the comments of the others, I thought the story tags were appropriate. The only one I would have probably added was not consensual. The story kept me intrigued and of course read it straight through. For the story tags that were listed I thought it was a great story.