All Comments on 'The Fairy and I Ch. 02'

I only wish the chapters were longer, five stars again.

It was another great chapter and you are getting better with each chapter. You need spelling mistakes in the following lines. "She nodded and goy out" and I finally filled the tub, taking "he" and, leading her to the water with me.

Longer chapters this chapter seemed shorter than chapter 1.

I like the story line. Your writing skills, spelling and grammar, should only improve with practice so keep going. Thank you for your efforts.

You need to work on spelling. Then you need to make the chapter's longer. Also the fairy needs to tell him what is going on. She is keeping to many secrets.