by A_Bierce
Your story is why we need fairy-tales and true love does happen everyday, somewhere in this world. Thank you for choosing to write.
What a great story! So feel-good and innocent - a tremendous five-star change of pace. Thank you for sharing this with us.
This story proves that a great romantic story can be written without explicit sex scenes. This one has suspense, tragedy, romance, fantasy, love, and a happy ending. Thank you for this refreshing story. I will be reading more of your stories.
Loved the story, but sorry to say what you (author) mentioned on page 1. The ending felt a bit rushed - would have preferred another 5 or 6 paragraphs, where Annie increasingly figured out the story was about her Grandma and Hal. That is - I would have appreciated seeing and hearing (as Annie is quite the interrupter) her reaction, followed by (several) squeals of joy. Nevertheless, still liked it very much. Ironically, after the first few paras, was wondering if Birdie and Hal were the lovebirds, until I realized Birdie was probably too old, and frankly not interested in a relationship with Hal. As the others have stated, 5 stars from me too!
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do use the best. Princess bride is up there.
Catherine, of course, is your secret.
Green-something