All Comments on 'The Fallen Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice start.

I would have loved a bit more characterization of the two men.....to give an insight to what's coming ahead. And it IS a short but promising chapter but am eagerly waiting for chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good start

It was short but a good start. Waiting for chapter 2. 😊

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
More??

How soon can we have more? I'm impressed so far and looking forward to the next chapter.

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