by JT_Thatch
Definitely longer submission than the previous one. I love that the pace is naturally flowing and that there is no need to rush to get to a sex scene. You are seriously proving to be a talented writer. Hope the next submission will be up soon.
This story is emotionally captivating on a very deep level. The characters plus the plot keep the reader "glued." I do hope to see more of it. -A very heartfelt journey so far indeed.