All Comments on 'The False House Ch. 03'

Love your character development and natural plot, on the edge of my seat until you post more

Where's the rest? I mean, your writing is superb and you are one amazing narrator Nakuru take it kindly when we are greedy and only want some more. Just wonderful.

Where's the rest? I

mean, your writing is

superb and you are

one amazing narrator

and you should take it kindly

when we are greedy

and only want some

more. Just wonderfu

I hope there will be more to this series. I think you are good at bringing a story to life. And to have this subject come to life entangled with a love story is amazing. Keep writing for you have a knack for it. The characters seem real and it brings the story alive as well.

Really assured writing and character development. Off to Ch4 now and really can't wait for more.