All Comments on 'The Family Business Ch. 03'
by Errantry
- 13 Comments
Eric_Shiftabout 13 years agoI can't believe the amount of work that would have to go into this story. You truly have a gift.
EdgarJames34about 13 years agoI am very much enjoying this, and I am impressed with your effort...I would pay to read this story...please keep up the good work and we will try to be patient...
Anonymousabout 13 years agoLike the way the story flows , which makes it easy to read . If readers want to leave negative feedback , they should atleast put their name to it .
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI'm loving this series. I can't wait for part 4 and to see how the party goes down.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHere you are talking smack about anonymous users and you post anonymously yourself. Nice job, jackass. There are a multitude of reasons people don't want to sign up to a site like this. Go back to whacking off to the queer stories.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI like the way you use ancient roman/Greek custom and names but with a modern twist, it makes for a very interesting read. I hope you plan to write more, I have to admit I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoYour anachronistic world and your characters are both extremely interesting; and it's first rate stroke material to boot!
I am eager to read more.
Anonymousover 12 years agoGet on with it already. I'm sick of waiting for people who start stories and then don't finish them.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI enjoy the story. well thought out and consistency of characters. hope for more chapters.
ZZchromosomeover 1 year agoIt would be nice if this continued, but after 11 years, I doubt he's coming back. Nevertheless, a very satisfying read.
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