All Comments on 'The Family Ch. 02'

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goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
like this story

you're giving us a nice feel for the characters. relatively well-written. i'm looking forward to chapter 3

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a28 days ago

Enoyable story. Logically developing plot. Subplot will be seamlessmerged wiith plot, if writer continues with the same dedication he has in developing Chapter 1 and 2.

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