All Comments on 'The Family Goes to Jamaica'

for 1 page. i don't mind a quick story from time to time, but this was quick with very superficial sex. like the last night "Mary said she wanted to spend some time with Nikki" and thats the whole mother daughter sex scene? its was like a rush to finish, not a rush to entertain.

The story is to reportish. Nit a story, more of a report

I don't particularly like multi page stories. That's my prefernce. Also, I never know how many pages Literotica will make it when it is approved.

Damn well done! I wanna go!

There are so many jerks out there. It made me hard. 🤪. Anytime mom eats daughters cunt and fucks son, hey, all is goog.

I hate, hate, HATE opening a story and only THEN finding out it's a continuation of a previous one. Did you think you other story was so magnificent people would automatically remember it? Would it have killed you to use that as your summary?

This wasn't a story, it was a series of statements, and you couldn't even bother to use proper English.

Worst post ever.

not much of a story. i like a quickie from time to time - but this seemed like a rush job. so, for example, the mom/daughter sex "scene": "Mary said she would like to spend some time with Nikki". really? where the sex? hard time rating this.

Every bit of the story was done as statements. That's bad enough. What's worse is the stats you list before even beginning your literary abortion. The only thing that I find worse than breast size experts in a story are statistics lists.

This is just bad i give no 🌟.

I gave it a 5 star review, Flash.

There was no art to your story. It reminded me of reading the instructions on a bottle of medicine. There's potentially a hot story here but what you have us is robotic at best.