All Comments on 'The Family Jackson Ch. 06'

You've done it again !!

The profundity of your ''isms''...just electric,so true and so kindly said.

Like I said before - your writing is unique.

Thanks for this chapter - are there more - please ?

Until you posted this story, I'd always viewed Amy's Smile by JFinn, to be the perfect mix of romance, emotion and humor, but you have now become my new standard. I hope to perhaps see a continuation of this story, as well as others, coming in the near future.

Seeing this story pop up today actually kinda made my day. I laughed, I came. Its like the first time I watched midget porn all over again.

Seriously though, you have a real talent here. I think Dillon may be my favorite male character on this whole site. If he keeps flaunting the truth to everybody while pretending its just him being a smartass, eventually someones going to catch on when they realize "Holy crap he said that about me too." I'm predicting Alexis noticing Janes blush when Dillon says something about anal.

The Kara thing was risky though. As realistic as a girl her age crushing on the guy who makes her feel loved it, its still pushing the site rules a little bit there so don't be surprised if you have some overzealous White Knight type flag this chapter as inappropriate. It wouldn't work, but they might try anyways.

All of the characters seem to just jump from the screen and come alive as I read this story.

Now that Jane is back home and doesn't have Dillon to take care of her. I wonder how long she will be able to go, before she comes back to Dillon for some more loving?

I think it's time for Dillon to take care of his mom and show her what it's like to have multiple orgasms in one sex session. They both know that they want it to happen, and Dillon has a good idea that his mom hasn't any experence when it comes to being made love to the way he can love a woman. I think she wants her bum hole licked, and now that she knows that Dillon has done it to Jane's bum, licked it and fucked it, she might want to try it herself.

Just a fantastic erotic story that I hope has a lot of chapters left to read.

Thanks for the good chapter.

I love humor and the story. I know that this is the end of the holiday arc, but please let there be more

The little shit that is Dillon does get under your skin, doesn’t he?

Yes, of course there is more to come. I’ve taken a few weeks off from writing about the Jackson Family. A bit burned out as rapidly as I was writing it. I don’t want the story to suffer, or the humor. I’ll get back to it in the next few days.

Irfon:

I’ve been called unique a few times, mostly not as a compliment. LOL. Thanks for the help as always.

Anony:

Thanks for putting me onto Amy’s Smile. It kept me up late last night finishing it in one sitting. With the conclusion written by “oldlockguy.” It was a great story and I’m flattered I’m the new standard.

Dpheonix:

Glad I could make your day. In the literary sense, that is. LOL. (Dirty Harry reference inserted here.) Oh, the little shit is going to get found out. The dumbass screwing up is a forgone conclusion. Haven’t really envisioned the fireworks yet. I had to think about the Kara story arc. The scene with her took the longest to decide on. She’s a lot of sixteen-year-old girls. Maybe too realistic. She’ll be a recurring character. I hope she’ll be somewhat unique if I do what I have in mind for her. In my mind, she’s become the most useful device to show that Dillon is unable to resist the women in his life. Even to the point of doing the wrong thing to make sure they aren’t hurt. I know it bordered on inappropriate, but he didn’t cross the line in his head to outright douchebag. If that makes any sense.

Digdaddyrich:

Thanks rich. For the comments and the email. I’m glad you get so involved in the characters. It tells me I’m doing something right. Jane is my personal favorite, with Mom slowly rising. Neglected and needy strikes a chord for me. Dillon being Dillon, he’ll always take care of anyone that throw themselves underneath him. It’s just how the poor kid is. A burden, really. Get used to suffering waiting for Mom. Life is too easy for the kid. Working for it with her is what he deserves.

Again thanks for following the story and the comments. Love them. I’ll have a few other stories popping up in the next few weeks. Mostly my attempt at writing an anti-Dillon. Not my usual style, but still interesting.

I have been without power for the past 4 days and have not been able to read the stories...I was suprised to come back to a new chapter which is amazing. I cannot get enough of this story line! Dillon will eventually get caught out as the new distraction, Kara, enters the picture to mess his world up just that much more. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I will definitely be re-reading this story line as the humor is just hilarious and the detail in your writting is really good. Keep up the good work and I hope there are many chapters to cum(pun intended) lol

and I mean that in a positive way. It's not that hard to write great porn, writing a great story is much, much harder. Dillons teasing still annoys me but I realize it's your fetish showing through ( I guess). He does redeem himself by making all the women happy, hell, I wish I could. 5 stars for story, humor and intersting characters. Favorite author too, what the hell, I'm hooked. Orgy with all his women gets fave story, settle for 3 way with Mom and Sis. (grins) At the risk of sounding greedy, pleased scrape your inner brain raw for the rest of this story, you are tremendously talented (and funny!) Thanks very much for sharing.

max052

I’m sure Dillon’s pecker would fall off if he wasn’t fictional. Though, the way he is, some girl would have tested the detachable theory. LOL.

jkrauser:

Thanks for following along. I have to reread some of the crap I’ve had the poor kid say, as well. Sometimes for the kicks and sometimes to get my brain back into character. I really don’t know how his parents didn’t forget him on vacation when he was littler. I can’t wait to see how it ends as well. Still don’t have a clue. Maybe him banging all the ladies in a retirement community.

Max052:

I’m flattered. I realize he’s an aggravating bastard to you. He’s a playful flirt that does get a kick out of teasing them when they’re on the edge of relief. Some women go wild for that sort of thing. Other’s clamp down and correct the man’s behavior rather forcefully. I’m pretty sure the orgy is out of the question. Sorry. I’d kind of like this story line to stay somewhat clean, relatively speaking. I’m working another story with that kind of angle. It’ll be up in a few weeks.

As to it being my fetish. Yes and no. Having fun in bed and out is all foreplay to me. The tease factor without putting out, no. Using it to build up the act, most definitely.

Update:

I’m over 2000 words into Chapter 7. Dillon is already getting slapped. This next chapter will spread out over a few months. Trying to keep the humor up to par takes awhile.

I followed all 7 stories about Dillon and the Jacksons over the course of a few hours today. I really enjoyed them. I was glad Dillon didn't end up getting with his mom like every other story around here. Judging from personal experience the aunt and cousin/sister not knowing about each other was a good realistic idea. I'd love to hear more of Samantha and Lexi's fun with Dillon or eachother.

He can tell his mom that he will be happy to eat her pussy for her. At least he can try to convince her that it is not sexual intercourse. then they could be joking and Dillon teases his Mom as he look closely at her pussy and press his nose to sniff hard and inhale at her musky aroma. Then after several days of oral, While Dillon licking his Mom's pussy he teases by pushing his head trying to get back inside her womb again and his Mom will laugh that he is a big man now that his head can't get in anymore...but then Dillon smiles and tells his Mom that he has another head a bit smaller that can get in...Then the Mom got shocked when Dillon showed that it is the head of his cock as a substitute....

I hope he has a few quarts of skin lotion tucked away in case he has to go for more than a few hours without cooze! Damn, I do remember that time in my life: I ducked into every dark corner I saw for a quick release. I wasn't interested in Magna cum Laude (too fat) or Sigma cum Laude, too much sigma attached to her, but Summa cum Louda was my goal. Huffs, whines, pants, groans, and gasps all had there places but SCREAMS cum Louder were the ultimate.

All I wanted up until about 27 (when I finally caved to the family's pressure to marry one of them) all I wanted from girls was screams to announce to the world that I was doin' sumpin RIGHTeously. I never went the incest route, but there were several sisters in the group that I tried to satisfy. I wish honesty had been more in vogue as I found that I couldn't read minds worth a damn, and the only reason that things went south was that somebody would start lying and the communication would start crashing and eventually all the good sex would crumble from lack of trust and love!

Damn I wish more ladies could be as truthful as several of my long lasting friends who are ladies. More truth --> more love --> more growth --> more truth, etc. Nice cycle when it works, but seldom does it work for all that long. Three ladies that I know stil work that cycle with me. One is kin, one is married, and one is clear across the country, so I don't have a chance to screw up those relationships.

I wish Dillon all the best and hope he gets to physically love all of his (female) family members. I hope they can find a lovin way to get around jealousy and angers and that Dillon does wear it out :)

Lynn

Can't wait for next chapter! Great job!

Great story can't wait to see how long it takes for Dillon to get his mother into bed keep up the great work.

I just read this story. All six chapters today. It's going on my favorites list. I hope you are not finished with "The Family Jackson". As has been said, I too want to read about Dillon making his mom a happy camper. Thanks for the good story! Hope to see more soon!

Fat_Dad

i want to read the fallout of them all getting caught....now that would make a great next chapter

Fantastic is all I can say, just fantastic.

I do want Dillon to have a good long sexual relationship with his mom and have her to want him as much as Dillon wants her, and she goes out of her way to find time to fuck her son, craving for her son's cock to be deep inside of her.

Perhaps she is like Aunt Jane and she will like having her asshole licked by Dillon and anal sex is something she goes crazy about wanting it all of the time.

I hope that there is something new coming out soon.

Thanks for the read.

Its been some time since we have heard from you. I hope you are doing alright and havn't let the computer melt down discourage further writing. We miss you.

Loved the story.....please consider keeping it going for perhaps a chapter or 2 more? I was absolutely falling out of my chair with the humor. Delightful!!

This was an abrupt ending. I really hope more is coming. Love the humor, but also the love he feels for the women.

A couple of things........VERY abrupt ending . I would like to see more of the Jackson family.

It's probably just me BUT you almost lost me in the hotel room with Jane. Didn't care for the almost "baby" talk they used. I know he's a "smartass" but I think that was pushing it.

it has been almost a year since you promised another chapter so we know how much your word means. we keep telling you you need a GOOD EDITOR and you keep FAILING to use one. if you read this out loud you would be ashamed you posted it and put your name on it. time for you to honor your promises and submit another chapter BUT USE A GOOD EDITOR FROM NOW ON NOT ONE OF THE HACKS YOU HAVE USED IN THE PAST.

I think his mom needs some of his loving and she becomes one of his women that he takes care of their sexual needs.

What would really shake up the family is if Dillon gets Jane pregnant and she spills the beans about their affair.

I hope to see more soon.

Do you really expect the author to listen to your screaming rant? Seriously??? Nobody pays any attention to a screaming ass. If you want your criticisms taken seriously, be constructive, specific, and leave the caps turned off!

Been reading Literotica for couple of years and you write the best story ever. I laughed so hard with your character Dillon. Even had to read some to my wife because she couldn't figure out why I was laughing so hard. Can't wait to read some of your other stories. Thanks.

I'm a published non-fiction writer in several national magazines, but I don't do fiction. So hope this is helpful. You are doing very well with fiction--good writing, believable plot, improving character development, etc. The difficulty with fiction stories is often knowing when to stop--not going too on long or too short with a story. In this case you should try to squeeze a few more chapters out of this plot, let the several good characters develop, but keep it believable. Reinforce your main character by resisting his mother for lots of good reasons. Evolve his sister and his younger cousins, A good friend who is a best selling fiction novelist provided some good advice when he said, " let the characters write the story, the author is only there to record what they do."

Loved these stories, l could and would read more

These are some of the most real characters and interactions ice read on this site. I only wish there was more, or a conclusion. I'd love to have some sort of a happily ever after for these wonderful, fragile, slightly broken characters.

loved the story thank you. I would like to read more of these loving characters perhaps even Sammy and Dillon getting caught and eventually living together. Alexis falling for a boy just like Dillon and maybe he gets to bed Kara a few years later.

Dillon Jackson, 20 years old, twisted, irreverent almost to the point of obnoxious, and absolutely incorrigible. But also with a good heart. A thoroughly enjoyable character.

This story, its lead in stand alone portion, and all of its chapters, has been a hell of a ride, and I loved every minute of it.

Thank you for sharing it.

5 Stars across the board.

One of the best stories I ever read online was wishing for a few more chapters.

Loved this story! I can imagine Robin Williams as Dillon. The warm repartee and loving charm you have him makes for a wonderful character. It is refreshing to read of a rascal being not only a horny s.o.b. but a charming, loving person. I would like more stories like this. Thank you for writing a very memorable tale.

luvthedeserts,

You do the character building so very well. Dillon is a very readable person and you keep his character consistent. The best partner for him in your stories is Sam; their relationship is deep, mutual and understandable as close cousins who learned about life together. Some of the read with Lexi was a bit harder to stay with. Her character seemed to be much less mature than an 18 yr old, so the interaction between her and Dillon was less clearly between equals. Even though it is clearly consensual and loving, it came across as a bit creepy. She needs to find a boyfriend, soon, and move on, but I would love to learn more about the relationship with he and Sam, and also with Jane. More is good!

Thanks for the wonderful story and for sharing it with us.

RiveViewGuy