All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Pt. 02'

This is a crazy and wild story, I like it and look forward to reading more. I'm curious to when the aunts and cousins are going to show up. I'm also wondering why Liz's husband would waste all of that money and then leave the house behind.

Just keep it in the family

Awesome story, extremely horny and I want to see where it goes...but...you should get an editor or at least have someone else read it before publishing to eliminate any mistakes.

Superb

I see this story in all chapters becoming all time top rank. It has the undertones of ‘Six Times a Day’ and eventually has its own website, graphics etc.

Congratulations to Charlie Fleming

I think Bri and his mom Liz should coach on how to lose his virginity to his twin sister

Of course this story can go on as they have to pay the taxes and other bills for the house besides the $50K

Please continue

If you remove two of three paragraphs and change words like pussy, cunt and cock, the story is PG13.

When the good moments come (meaning sex) Nathan is too excited and cum in two sentences. It's like having an hour of foreplay and when it becomes serious... Pschit... the guy has an hair trigger and comes in his shorts.

A story like that should have long and hot sex scenes.

I dont understand how this story can have such a high rating. 15 pages of everyone wanting to do something but everyone is so fucking whiny and spineless, except Erika. There is no way the entire family would have this much guilt for doing what they all want to do. And then bringing in a non family member into it was also just a terrible idea. Not even worth a 1 star to be honest.

Just realllllllllllly long, drawn-out to the point of boring...and what the fuck is the point of the maid coming back and trying to control everyone and everything

THIS STORY ISN'T MORE THAN A 3.5 AT BEST

When Brooke called herself an incestslut I wondered. If that is what a woman who is into family love calls herself, what would us men call ourselves? Society would call us perverts n sick/dirty old men

Awful just…. Wow this is bad

i have to agree with the others i really hope this picks up soon. every chapter is the same shit. i want my son i dont want him but i do but i cant but i want him we arent doing this anymore 3 sec later let me suck your cock even though i said thats off limits. i regret this but i wanna do it again. everyone is such a bitch so far except erika. you have group sex as a tag and n actual sex has happened..........

You have found an excellent premise for this story, unfortunately your lack of basic spelling and grammar would cause an elementary school teacher into an apoplectic attack. This work needs to be removed from this site, proofread and vigorously edited prior to being republished