by Mused
I am in a state of shock! Julie Was right to worry about telling Rick about her pregnancy. He turns out to be a not very likeable, selfish ‘child’ whose idea of safe sex is to attempt a hasty withdrawal. His “carriage full of our fucked-up babies” and “three-eyed nieces and flipper-handed nephews that their own aunt gave birth to” shows the true extent of his feelings (love?) for Julie! You are going to find it extremely difficult to change the negative opinions that many readers, of this series, now have of Rick.
your story is great ... and we love ur chqaracters .... we want rick to turn out to be a worth while guy ...like i said we love the characters we want more!!!!
I disagree with the comment about Rick. I just think, like MOST people out there, his idea of an baby born from incest is automatically deformed. He's a guy, with a dick, who is acting selfish sometimes but at least he's thinking about the financal problems and social problems that will come from it. It would be better off if both of them graduated into adulthood, finally, and got REAL jobs (yeah - I'm 19 and I'm making $18/hr doing administrative work Rick and Julie could both be doing also) and moved away from where they know people. They could get their own place (larger than a studio), get better jobs, get married... the world is full of possibilities.
Keep that in mind... how huge the world really is.
Finish the story, Don't leave us hanging like that.
...time to grow up kid! Here they are fucking like rabbits and he is just NOW worrying about spawning incest infected, subhuman babies? Good thing she is young as well. These two needed to research some before crossing the bubba/bubbett incest line. Then they would have known that the chances of them having a "deformed" baby are miniscule, even compared to a non-related couple. I think the love here is strong, but the dumb kid factor makes it all a crap shoot at best. They need to get their parents back into the picture again. In short...they really need some useful advise, and she needs to get mad and tell dufus boy that he can pull out all he wants...IT'S TOO DAMN LATE. This fantasy is about to get VERY real...
hey, what's about the comment on ur profile - 'The Family Room is done'.... are u tired of writing it.. then, probably u never should have started it.. u have been one of my fav's here. Top 3. now, in this story, after this prolonged sessions of their life together outside their home and the imminent birth of their baby, the emotions emitting from this issue - u r quitting.. that's not like u man. I wasn't all that satisfied with the ending of Worth It too. U didn't show us how a baby fit in their loving life but at least we saw a picture of them at 29. here? u have given us a hanging question, an uncomfortable situation where Julie is a bit afraid, disconcerted but awfully optimistic and romantic about having a true family with Rick which includes her hope of having more children and then, Rick is quite paranoid about having babies which belied his intentions in Chapter 3 and 7,8. His concerns about not being able to live as a suppossed couple, or having a family do raise doubts about his previous kind and loving notions about Julie. I know - there are contradictions in human psyche. But, I can only hope, after all the thoughtful and greatly divine feelings Rick nourished for Julie he would not treat Julie as something fucking toy which in the last chapter he seemed to do very well indeed. If u want to keep him like that, Julie does deserve better.
and, don't stop this story now. as one of ur die-hard admirer, i can say, it would just deteriorate ur reputation of being one of the most romantic author with depths of emotion and commitment. I do hope - u would listen to our fervent request. but, it's ur show anyway.
well, what more.... nothing.... greatly dissappointed.... but, nothing else....
Love the story as usual and gave another 5 stars. Why is Rick being such a dick thou? He claims to love her and be unable to live without her yet his breakimg her heart and hurting her feelings. Damnnnn
Bloody hell this started off being a great ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ story but you’ve really drawn this out haven’t you, nearly two bloody chapters just to tell him she fucking pregnant REALLY. Boring..I really hope this story picks up because it’s going downhill fast….