All Comments on 'The Family Secret'

by Twistedpleasures

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horseman2bighorseman2bigabout 3 years ago

Very very HOT got me all worked up, need more PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good, but one problem

You forgot to add a big, steamy load in her cunt. There's more to futas than butt-fucking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

'Twas fun 2 read, easily one of my favs. Looking forward to similar works in the future :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
amazing!

Hoping for series :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Dammit futa incest, that's what i like, moarrrr of this please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Sequel?

Would you ever consider a sequel? Really enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

wish you would write more about Morgan and Nicole. I wish iw as in Morgan's place. My daughter is lovely but doesn't have equipment like Nicole.

BelphegorBelphegorabout 12 years ago
Rarity and Quality

Thanks for writing this! I rarely, if ever, am able to find a properly edited story about dickgirls fucking women. For some reason, it's almost always about them "pegging" males instead, which is on par with Lemonparty for me in terms of boner-killing ability.

In fact, I'm feeling inspired. I think I'll finally be able get to work on a few ideas of my own now.

TwistedpleasuresTwistedpleasuresover 12 years agoAuthor
Glad it's (mostly) gone over well!

Glad this is at least as hot as it is strange! I am working on a follow-up, but I only write when I'm REALLY into it, so it might be a while before it's finished.

As to the Nicole-Priya connection: Good Catch! Of course it's a nod to IN-DG (a great site for the fetish). I wouldn't say "source material," but it can be if that fleshes out the universe better for you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
source material

I cant help but notice the names. Nicole and Priya. Innocentdickgirls.com?

Kirilios_XianKirilios_Xianover 12 years ago
Hot Redheads! Hell Yeah!

I wholehartedly concur! We need more of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hmm

eewwwYES. Strange. Why does this story feel hot?!? Should have voted 4 but hit 3 just cuz Weird but very Erotic and.. Did I mention Odd? OK so Yes! Would very much like to see more. w

silver766silver766over 12 years ago
Hot!!!!!!

I'm with anonymous, I didn't know I would be into this, it defintely caught me by suprise. Your story is seriously hot! Please continue it.

Thank you from miss silver766.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WOW!

I sure wasn't expecing that. I can't wait to read more!

mschack63mschack63over 12 years ago
five stars from me

I have to laugh at the the first anonymous poster who takes the time to read the entire story before calling it a load of drivel.

I would take a star back if I knew how though, because of the 12" cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More Please

This is one of the hottest stories I've read for a while, with the sister/ aunt arriving at the end I think there's room for expansion, please write another chapter or something similar, and possibly dial the aggression from the daughter up by 5%, and possibly make the mother more submissive,

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow...

That was hot and I didn't even know I was into that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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what a load of drivel

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