All Comments on 'The Farm'

Not ronance, belongs in erotic couplings.

A little bit of loss of time continuity toward the end but well edited and grammar checked. That's something missing on soooo many submissions.

Would like to read about him fucking her one more time in the shower, maybe in the ass.

Story does not start as a romance. There is no set up for a romance. What romantic overtures took place? We know very little about the characters at the beginning. In other words no character development! Very strange romance. Not a bad effort but requires more development so people can follow the romance.

This is in wrong category.It shouldn't be in Romance category.

There is no Romance in the starting nor any kind of romance set up building as the story progresses.

It belongs in Erotic couplings category.

The admins should really read and check whether the author have followed the guidelines for the particular category rather then let the authors post anything they like in whichever category they like.

Some of us readers are choosy about a particular story category and want stuff related to it only.

If it was in Erotic couplings category i would have give it maybe 4 stars but as i found it in romance and i was in mood of reading a nice romantic story and this had no romance in it at all so giving it a Friggin 1 *.

Next time please post it in Erotic couplings if there is no romance in the story so pleade do yourself and readers a favor next time.

By the way nice narration.

Give Niles some chest hair -- he is one sexy guy, and his chest hair can graze her nipples and heighten her sensitivity!

Erotic Coupling story. NOT EVEN a hint of love here thus, NOT a Romance...

OKAY I GET IT. It's in the wrong category. There isn't a way I've found to change the category so everybody can stop telling me it belongs in the erotic couplings category. I mean really, do you even read the other comments? Why bother spending all the time to repeat what others have written?

maybe erotic coupling there is no romance here. 1 star for the lousy effort...

This is a lovely romance story, but it needs a better introduction and build up. The love scene is well-written, although its brevity is a drawback. This story is NOT an Erotic Couplings story. With all the tenderness, love, and romantic atmosphere in it, The Farm is a romance, albeit an incomplete one. This story simply needs to be revised and expanded, not re-categorized.