All Comments on 'The Favor'

by An Awful Cad

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elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueabout 17 years ago
Has the makings.

The story within a story dampens the tension a bit but you write well and the idea is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it

Very hot story....Loved it :<)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Highly enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Highly enjoyable!

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