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He sat back on his heels and he gazed at her spread before him and began to jerk his cock to the sight of her open and raw pussy, still showing spasms from the after-effects of her orgasms and need, her whimpers of want all arousing to his senses. He felt his cum loading and ready to explode, and he shot onto the crack of her ass, spurt after spurt hitting her slit, dripping down off her clit. He rubbed it into her legs as he watched the dripping from her pussy, thoroughly pleased at the mess in front of him.
She laid still, not knowing what was going to happen next. But he rose to his feet and pulled up his jeans. He helped her stand and he zipped her dress back up. She could only stare at the dirty pile of cardboard and the earth beneath it. He had fucked her there. He had violated her completely on this piece of ground and she already wistfully recalled the free falling feeling of being taken and overpowered with her own orgasms that were brought about without her consent. Taking her by the arm, he walked her up to the front of the building. He picked up the sign with the slogans on it and handed it back to her, giving her a little push on out into the chanting crowd. And with that, he turned and headed back to his truck, still parked in traffic on the street.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI suppose it takes all sorts.......................
I'm quite fond of the odd rape fantasy, but why do they nearly always end with the woman accidentally enjoying it?
Regards,
A. Liberal Feminist.
Anonymousover 3 years agoDon't care about the liberals here. They find injustice in every fucking thing. Keep writing!
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis could have had potential if it wasn’t so... wrong
The main antagonist is unlikeable, a douchebag, and he isn’t erotic in any sense. As a non-con story, I get that he has to be unlikable to an extent, but he’s exactly what a rapist is, so that’s at least worthy of a one star, I guess. An entitled douchebag.
I can see this is meant to be fiction, but it hits a bit too close to home. Seperate feminism from erotica, please. It’s sending a message that feminists should be taken down a peg or two, and regardless of intent, that’s a horrible message to send to the young women on this site.
However, congratulations on the spelling and grammar being correct.
Anonymousover 9 years agoIf there was a connection to some real event, I didn't get it and it didn't distract me. I thought this was fiction.
I also really hate when some commentators try to analyze the authors religion, race, age, mental health etc. based on the story. IT IS FICTION. Otherwise most the authors writing murder stories should be jailed. Ugly things may be a way to build up the plot.
As a criticism, what this had to do with feminism?
Keep on writing.
Anonymousover 9 years agoThis was probably written by some neckbearded white man in his 20-30s, with a lot of racist tendencies. I don't know if they thought making their user name something vaguely feminine would prevent people from realizing the blatant and disgusting hate speech, or if perhaps this was actually written by a lady named Elizabeth. In which case she's still super racist and filled with internalized misogyny. My advice? Google some shit. Or maybe get a therapist. Your facts are off (like. Way off. Check the coroners report and the witness reports). Your writing itself isn't bad. Maybe instead of using your talent to perpetrate your ignorance on a website for people interested in playing with their respective genitalia, you can use it to express your emotions about that girl who rejected you in highschool. Maybe you'll even be able to get over it. Or use it to express how you felt when you got passed over for promotion at work in favor of a more successful person of color. Hell, maybe you'll get over that too. But for the love of god, please don't sully my erotica with your shitty personal views.
Anonymousover 9 years agoInteresting story, and I think the true 'politics' about this is all the shrill, self-serving people with their pithy comments as they believe in what they believe in, and not reality.
Freedom of speech includes those people who support law enforcement, those who understand people (and children) who commit crimes should be treated like criminals, and those who have opinions that don't have to always fit the template of the politically correct, self-serving in reality pretending they are special but ultimately useless mob.
kitten1964over 9 years agoI have never felt like leaving negative reviews on this site, since I know how hard writing can be. But this read more like a badly disguised rant than an actual erotic work. It was very non-arousing and quite off-putting. I think next time, leaving the real-life situation out of it would make for a more satisfying read.
I also agree with the commentator that remarked it might be best to know ALL the facts of the case before writing about it, as it prevents one from making stupid-sounding assumptions and ruining the mood, if you're determined to use real life in your writing.
