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by Cromagnonman
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wapentakeabout 3 years agoYour story may not be absolutely realistic, but as with most of your other tales, it was entertaining and I for one thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It does what all of the other submissions should do, that is provide the reader with an entertaining escape from reality. The usual five from me.
chytownabout 3 years agoVery Entertaining Read****
Very fast pace Joe Friday type story. Good Read. Thanks for sharing.
Anonymousabout 3 years ago“leaving Tracey and I to improve our own relationship”
Maybe he was leaving Tracy to improve our own relationship, but I doubt he was leaving I to improve our own relationship.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoTotally Rushed
A typo even in the title! Thinly narrated, no flesh to the bone. The relationships come out of nowhere and the developments in the story have no basis to build upon. Not your best!
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Cromagnonman@CromagnonmanI'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...
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