by davidpaul
Really good story so far, looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing it.
The characters are stronger than in your last story and the chapters are much longer as well.<P>
Nice job!
With High Regard
You had me hooked with 'Enter Sandman'. Once again you've produced a really well crafted story. Apologies for not leaving a comment with chapter one. I came across this story today and couldn't wait to get the next chapter. Thanks for a read that makes me use the old grey matter!
what's up with Cathy?
She's the one that betrayed her fiancee, so why's she upset with Jack?