All Comments on 'The Fighting Finnegan's Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story so far

Really good story so far, looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice Work Author - I like the Australian Setting

The characters are stronger than in your last story and the chapters are much longer as well.<P>

Nice job!

With High Regard

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
A Really Engaging and Well Written Story

You had me hooked with 'Enter Sandman'. Once again you've produced a really well crafted story. Apologies for not leaving a comment with chapter one. I came across this story today and couldn't wait to get the next chapter. Thanks for a read that makes me use the old grey matter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice

Nice work Author. Really getting into this story

Bebop3Bebop3over 5 years ago
Good Story, but

what's up with Cathy?

She's the one that betrayed her fiancee, so why's she upset with Jack?

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