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by PulpWyatt

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WillieTurnerWillieTurner11 months ago

I like this very much. It's hard to write a believable and sustainable female led culture, but I think you are getting very close to that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome!

Excellently written, I hope there will be more to this story, I'd love to see where Amita takes Lusio <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great work

This is well written with some great ideas. The characters and world make sense unlike most stuff in this genre. I really enjoyed it, outstanding.

Perhaps it could be paced better. The deflowering seemed really important but had very little build up. I would think that he would be more angry about what just happened. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting concept

Sort of reversed world... And hot interaction. Would love to see more femdom like this

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I am a professional driver who lives on the Colorado prairie. Up until mid-2021, I wrote stories about female domination and submission. Eventually, I got uncomfortable with it and stopped, but my stories are still here for you to read.