All Comments on 'The Fireplace Doesn't Cut It'

I really enjoyed the way the sister initiated the play. This is more enjoyable than where two siblings just jump each others bones without any content leading up to the events. Great job.....cant wait for part II

You have to continue this story.

great submission Keep it going!

Fantastic story.....PLEASE keep it going!!! Loved the interaction between your Characters. Looking forward to much more from you!!

very good, please write more.

story, please continue it, can't wait for part 2

I always regretted not having had a sister. THis great story is confirming that my regret was justified.

Please write more.

Really loved this story,excellent character creation and giving them life. This one was alot of fun to read and the sex was well written. Great lead up really made the story please write more!!

Wonderfully worked out plot; feels real. More adventures of Nikki, please.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Regards GtBoomer

So please write more and give it to her! And I'm sure a horny adventurous girl like her would be curious to find out what it feels like to have her brother's cock in her ass.

I hope there is more to come.....Your story has brought great pleasure to this man...

One of the best bro-sis action I have read in a long time! Definently more, please! :)

You did a really nice job of bringing the details of every movement and emotion to life . The whispering in his ear added a nice touch also .

Words fail me, it was no less than awesome. I wish my sister was like that.

I give can only 5. Do, do let us have more of these two, now they've made there start, together!

Lukas

Very enjoyable story! I would love to read more about these two siblings exploring sex. I especially liked the strip poker game & would enjoy more games, bets, forfeits, etc. as they explore sex and one another.

I loved the read! I hope there are more adventures!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Please continue the story, that was great!

We are all still waiting for more. It was a great read! I hope you continue it someday.

good but needs a second chapter to tell if the parents find out and if they keep fucking also what happens when they go to college and beyond you get us hooked then leave us hanging shame on you

I have read a number of stories of twins, but this was the BEST EVER!!!! You blended affection and erotic sex together. I was hard for so long before I had to take a break! Try to contnue the series as it was excellent writing.

I absolutely adored this story. Normally I tend to gloss over some of the setup, but I read every word. It was the perfect combination of affectionate banter and hot sex. 5 stars.

it was amazing i got so horny over it

another writer that wastes our time with an unfinished story. there was no real background he just jumped into the middle of the action, and eight years later still no second chapter that should have been the third if it was done properly.

Is it still a continuation with ten years between chapters? I would really like to see the next scene.

GT

I have been using this site for many years. This is the best story I have read yet.

Playing strip poker in a cold house makes as much sense as Daniel tossing a pride of starving lions into a packed church on BINGO night! ... someone is going to be eaten.

i find this story hot and would like to read more. I'm trying to come up with a story like this and hope to post it.

You have the basis for a great love story .

Keep up the writing.