by Pilgrim
rather, grim and clinical. At that it was a pretty realistic depiction of how emotionless some male-male encounters can be. I've been there. Best, Ken
There was no build up, no tension; which is usually what I like most in these types of stories, but it really did the trick for me. Especially the 2 paragraphs about licking/sucking on his ball sack. That will almost always put me over the top.
Overall, the story seemed very realistic. Good work! Hope to see more!
~Redbird1376
This story built to a climax in a realistic, straightforward manner. I liked it!
I like the way you captured the feeling of a hard cock spewing cum in your ass. It truly is a wonderful feeling!!
Very similar to my first time. This story makes me want to cheat on my wife agin.
Could easily drive any straight guy to give head and give up his tight asshole for hot sex like that. Like to have my ass filled with a hot cock like that, if I was going to have a man stick his cock in my mouth and butt-fuck me.
That description was such a turn on. Got me so hard I need a cock in me taking my tight virgin arse.
I loved the hole story. I only expected a good blow job story...but then when he fucked his ass....that was awesome!