All Comments on 'The First Chronicle of Jenni'

Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Of Sex, some exhibitionism, first time and stuff. A couple of errors that caught my eye, I'd be surprised if it took them 3 hours to eat each other out, and when affect is a noun it turns to effect. Looking forward to chapter 2 though.

I was wet throughout! Really appealed to my love of bad guys! Write on!!! x

That was great thanks!

It would be great for them to meet up again. This time bring some older men into the story. She struggles with her inner demons, but succumbs.

Finally he convinces her to seduce her daddy...

Very nice! If there could be a CH2 where her father is woven into the story, that would be great!

Thanks for a beautiful story.