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by nick_shaw

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LSantiagoLSantiagoover 2 years ago

Good pacing good, crafted well, the scene had and interesting denouement. A story that if you chabged a word will mess it up its so tight,

Hurry up don't be bashful and upload the rest

BlackswoleBlackswoleover 2 years ago

Quite the debut story. Well done!

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

Good read - can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Are you going to write any more???

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My stories tell of my thoughts, feelings, and sensations through a picture painted with words. The women that I have known are plain or beautiful, smart, sophisticated or common, but all are very sensual. They often dress to impress and know how to show off their figures. Th...