All Comments on 'The First Disciple'

by Kingmaker711

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pentheswordpentheswordalmost 11 years ago
Ahh the start of corruption

I'm a little surprised as to how little it took to convince Ingrid. Still, a well written short.

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 11 years ago
Wow

Good story, slightly short, but well written, I can't wait for more

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