All Comments on 'The First Domino Pt. 01'

Another potential winner from Shaima. What more could we ask for at the weekend? As usual, filled with believable, real-life characters and the second chapter can't come quickly enough (hint! hint!). Good to see you in action again, Shaima.

5 stars as usual. Always look forward to your stories. Keep them coming!

SB

Good part one, I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Shaima, you're off to a great start. Careful. Please re-read your story or have Beta readers do it in order to catch grammatical errors. Otherwise, it's a great story. It's paced well, the character build-up is nice and cohesive with past characters and it has an element of suspense. I am so looking forward to Pt. 02

wow what a start to another of your awesome stories . i grew up in melbourne - loving the references . and yes i'm dying to read more . thank you - sarah .

What a great start ... I cannot wait to read your next chapter.

After reading here for years, today I discovered a new favorite writer. Off I go to read my second Shaima32 story!