All Comments on 'The First Leaf's Fall: Ripples'

Great 2nd instalment to an ongoing saga. I really loved the twist at the end. I must admit as i read it, i was dismayed how this could even be comming from the same story teller. The writing style was the same but the story seemed so unrealistic, sudden and harsh (but hot in its own way). The twist that you reveal at the end puts it into wonderful perspective.

A glorious part two to what hopefully is a glorious saga of beautiful and nasty possibilities.

Thank for sharing your work.

Wow...

I have to agree with the first person to comment that this story is such a contrast to your first story of the series. Not in just the content but in the writing aswell.

Man that story was absolutely amazing, and I seriously hope you keep writing. I'm definitely bookmarking your memberpage so I can keep reading your work.

The most amazing thing it that your characters seem so real. Almost like I could know this person in real life. Not the stereotypical characters in the stories I have read in the past. Again I love the how you take the thoughts of the people and put them out there instead of just giving in to using boring old speech. We are truly captives of our minds and I think you emphasize the fact that thoughts are more erotic than words. Truly great wrting and I hope you'll release another story soon!

dreams and stories about dreams belong in the FANTASY area nowhere else delete this series and repost it in the correct area "FANTASY"

A very unexpected second chapter

WHAT DO i THINK?

cONFUSION, dRIVEL!

nO COMMENT, not worth The EFFORT