All Comments on 'The First Time'

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bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Enjoyed this story. He played well with her curiosity and kept things fairly light. Having read some of your other stories, you have created a gentleman Dom. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Your Punctuation and Grammar

Uhhh is Jack British?

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