All Comments on 'The First Time'

This opening has a lot of potential--I'll be curious to see where you go with it.

I hate low down desperate faggots who resort to blackmail in order to get what they want. I don't see there being anything wrong with what happened here. And of course, it's always stereotypically the BLACK guy putting himself in position of blackmailing someone in these stories

Hot, would love to see more

Potential. You got to give me more before I am buying into this story though.

Need more to decide is this story will go anywhere, but a fair bargaining.

Mmmmm exciting.

At 17 I met my older friend. He heloed eith math, but this night he dropped his pants and I eas inshock. His cock was long and thick. He got close to me and placed his head on my lips. I ooened my mouth and struggled to get his huge head in. He held my head and pushed almost all in. He began fucking my mouth. His cock grew thicher. He shoved it all and began flooding my mouth. I swallowed everything. I ended up cleaning his huge shaft.

He promised next time he wanted my anal pussy.

This was terrible. It gave me soft penis. Stop writing.

This is a great start for a story, but you should have written more. I assume you are planning more chapters, but make them a little longer if you want to keep people interested.