All Comments on 'The First Time'

As a First Time, regardless of how much of this is glossed over and supplemented, it was a very nice story. Not all of us had such a successful first time, or second, or...you get the picture, so it was nice to read about this one.

Keep writing, you have good things to say and you say them well.

This story was really more about "making love" than the typical "first time". You did a great job and the young man matured in a loving manner. Thanks for a nice cleanly presented story.