All Comments on 'The First Time'

by johnson69

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 5 years ago
Where

Where is the rest of it? It has no ending. It just stops.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Very well written until .......the end? Still........would love to see part 2?

johnson69johnson69about 5 years agoAuthor
episodic

I'm sorry you didn't like the ending. It was just an episodic story that didn't require resolution.

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