All Comments on 'The First Time for Me'

The storyline was ok, but the read was tough for me. You probably need to proofread your story before publishing, take your time check the spelling and if you can't read though it easily think of ways to make the read better. It is a story that has the possibility to add chapters but the read has to much easier. Good luck with your future stories.

I'd love to read more

More cabin action please. I'd love to be Tony. I can't get enough cock or cum.

i want to read more also,, this was so hot, it could have been longer, and more seductive, but it was a solid four stars.

I'd love to read more about this interesting group. I'd love to be the newest member of the cabin club! 😛😋😀