by Dinsmore
Very nice work. Good hot, raw sex and I particularly liked the way you developed the connection between the rawness of the sex and the changes in the relationship and even the personalities of the two characters.
Great work! I'm seldom inspired enough to leave comments on this forum; however, yours was well written and developed. I look forward to more.
I was really inspired by how you told your story and keep taking side trips, then returning to your original thoughts. The use of an editor would help you with some minor problems. Keep Writing!
Well written and above all: believeable. Whether true or not, it is just a fantastic piece of work.
i had my first ass fucking last week.. i know how she felt.. brought back all the nice memories and got me wet .. im going to go fuck myself hard now! THANKS