All Comments on 'The Florida Trip Pt. 01'

I was so excited when I saw this story, and then I read it’s going to take place in WDW?!?! You have officially been promoted to the best writer on this site!

Really enjoyed The Baseball Trip and this is an excellent follow-up based on this posting. I like the new additions to the group. Thank you.

Welcome back Spector. Baseball road trip still one of my favorites, this is off to a very good start, Keep them coming

Loved the baseball trip and this submission, given the small change in casting, has equal potential for a perverted road trip. Great lead in and entertaining build up. (Something so many of the authors on this site could take lessons from.) That said; let's try not to spot the seats in brothers Honda. Well... maybe just a tiny bit.

Please, can Kevin return home because of an emergency leaving Kelsey behind to continue the trip? Please? Please?

Spector,

What a great way to start the sequel! Although I'm not thrilled about the addition of Kevin, I'm keeping an open mind given your writing skills! LOL!

Keep up the great work and all will be well to keep you at the top of my Favorites list!

X-Man

But I also feel that you just did a massive 180 on bens write up, if he was not built for long lasting relationships and casual/open ones, his relationship with Julia would not be as strained as it was.

I also feel that his new girl is going to be a problem but that’s a different story for later changing.

Great start to the series. I have to wonder if somewhere between SC and FL that an emergency is going to arise for both Kevin and Alyssa that forces them both to go back leaving Ben as the only rooster in the hen house without his mate. We'll see. If not, I get the feeling that Alyssa ends up with Kevin before the end of the trip and Ben gets Sarah and Kelsey. This is going to be so much fun!! Five stars and a favorite point!

How will you go from here?

I can’t wait for the next chapter

Cracka start to the next trip, we’ll done!

Very well written. Nicely crafted both from a technical standpoint (no grammar goofs or typos that I noticed) and a design standpoint. I didn't feel like I missed out on anything for not having started with the previous, baseball road trip. I look forward to following the rest of the series.

5 stars.

so the plot will be around how Kevin fucks Alyssa