All Comments on 'The Fool Ch. 08'

This story keeps getting better and better. Thanks

I thought Jordan was one of the good guys . . . Dang.

Loving this!

So you've taken us on this long ride only to take away any hope? Screw you.

Is anon talking about? This is a great story.

Really very strange as a chapter.

Carrie, who is described as a confident, strong, independent Xena: Warrior Princess style woman, finds herself a little mouse at the first difficulty.

And Jordan, who seemed almost transparent, suddenly becomes Darth Vader.

Hence the question: If Jordan is that strong or that powerful, why wasn't he The Fool?

Moreover, not being The Fool, (thus without demonstrating his skills), how can he claim to join a secret organization of Elite Thieves and then take over its leadership?