All Comments on 'The Forbidden Basement'

I gave you a 5 but I wanted to give you a 4.5 had there been an option. The best part of the story was not the bondage or the "silly / foolish" spanking as if that has some purpose during sex, an act which is supposed to produce pleasure and not pain for "both or all" parties involved. Anyway, you got the 5 because of "her lips were pretty swollen and soaking wet with her juices. I closed my eyes and licked another woman for the first time, the thought alone of what I was doing enough to have me soaking wet." The domination statement of clean her up is fine, she has a choice and she very obviously chose to do the RIGHT one!

That needs a follow up chapter.

Really hot! Looking forward to how you continue it!

WONDERFUL story. Can't read to more in this series from you.

Nice story, gets 5 stars, no problem. Only remark I had, is no hugs and still calling him sir outside of the room. I would suggest she calling him daddy outside and sir in the basement.

Could make the story a little bit better. It's incest after all...

I agreee with @anonymouse 2 months ago... exactly...