All Comments on 'The Forbidden Fruit: A Wicked Tale'

A good werewolf story, But from the way you described The girl's eyes earlier in the story it looked like she was a succubus, not a werewolf. You described red, serpentine like eyes which are the eyes of a succubus, not a werewolf. I gave you 5-Stars for an excellent story. It would be interesting to know whom the group was that surrounded them chanting during their transformation into werewolves. For your 1st story it was well written with an excellent plot and good character development. Werewolf stories are my favorite type of story followed by succubus then vampire. Wardmaster 91D70

Great story, well written. Of historical interest, Sherman did not burn Savannah. He, along with his army, arrived in Savannah just before Christmas 1864. They spent the holidays in Savannah and left it relatively untouched in early 1865. There are rumours that Sherman had a lady acquaintance who offered him her hospitality if he would spare her city. We will never know the actual truth.