All Comments on 'The Foreman Ch. 01'

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sexy_nimphsexy_nimphalmost 20 years ago
no end!

a slow start but once it got going, WOW i hope this is not the end! you could go so far with this story. i hope to see more very soon!!

sexy_nimph

desertlvrdesertlvralmost 20 years ago
Sooo Hot

I can't wait for a threesome between those guys. Please don't let it end here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
between

sending your comments isnt too bad...but please check your grammar if you ever write a story. you cant have a threesome btwenn three people, but yoiu can have one among three people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT.

Loved it. Waiting patiently for Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
same garbage

In your previous story "Fucking Matron" I left a comment for you to read, the way I feel I about this story, all I can say is the same comment applies. YOU SUCK AS A WRITER!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wonderful story, very hot. Your stories are well worth ready, and don't let anyone tell you differently.

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