All Comments on 'The Forest Guardian'

Filthy...............for all the right reasons.

Like the idea of an incubus too, they're usually very naughty indeed!

Just beautiful!

What happens to the girlfriend?! I am so sick and tired of storied with supposedly straight men who suddenly convert to gaydom and live happily ever after. What about everybody else they have hurt do they just not matter!!!?

dear so sick and tired. get a life its fantasy....

I really enjoyed your story. I know you said it was your first little short story, but I would love a longer version. Great job.

Obviously you didn't care for this story and more obviously you didn't get the intent. I detest people like you that trash an author's work and don't have the guts to post under a name. If you are too gutless to post under your screenname than keep your opinions to yourself!

If you don't like stories involving straight men, don't read them. There are many stories whose topic I don't like, so I don't read them. If I start one by mistake, I simply don't finish it.

Now, this story I read but it wasn't a favorite. It was so short, I did read it, but it does involve cheating so I probably won't read any more.

Loved it. I love reading your stories.

I like the ideas here. Now you just need to flesh them out. Why was Alaric in the forest? What/who is a forest guardian and why did Azrael think Alaric might be one? Who is Azrael at school before the encounter, and how would taking a male lover change him? Where's the girlfriend? You could show more of the characters without turning this into a chapter book. Just sneak in little more background and clean up the narrative.

I look forward to the second draft, should you decide to write one.

I have been thinking about doing a side along sequel that is from Alaric's point of view instead, covering events before and after their coupling. Wasn't sure if people wanted more of it though or not. ^_^;; Let me know either in comments, message or on my twitter if you'd want to read a side-along story to this one!

I saw your comment that you were thinking of doing a sequel from Alaric's point of view. I really hope that you do; I would love to read a bit of a longer story with more background and a more drawn out ending. Keep up the good work :)

Excellent results on your first time out! In this piece you travel on "two paths", one that offers original ideas and the other path which offers the standard cliches. I hope as your writing abilities develop you will remain on the former path. Best wishes for continued success! I look forward to reading your creative writing in the future.

Hi. Nice flow in the writing. Enjoyed the style, topic and length. And would enjoy more. Good luck.

So you just going to leave us hanging like this? I need to know what happens after. Please, please, please.