All Comments on 'The Forest Nymph Pt. 02'

I loved the story!

I loved it! You have a gift of setting - essential for the best stories. I saw the orchard, felt the fruits, smelled the rushing water. My heart jumped throughout the final battle, and I stayed up to finish Part 2 way past my bedtime.

Have you written a novel? Not a Literotica-style (this lacks the sex every page-style), but a long form story? I would like to read it.

It ended too abruptly for me and left some unanswered questions like did she regain all her powers? Did they have a child? Did he have anymore contact with the gods especially after the battle. I thought some sort of reward or gratitude for saving the world and the gods were in order, anyway for me this story is incomplete. Still overall I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I have enjoyed this tale of good and evil. Your writing is superb. My hope for you is too continue with many more of these adventurous tale. Live long