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HappilyLockedManHappilyLockedManover 6 years ago
Blasting Immediacy

I really liked your using the first person It makes the story so very real to me.

( I think you intended to use'taut', not 'taught' )

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I'm just an amateur writer that likes to do erotic short stories. My stories are written to appeal to Kinksters, and uploaded to Fetlife.

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